Friday, August 24, 2018
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I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Nice work Ryan!! I love the colours you have used and have a nice piece of writing underneath. what you could work on is that you could make the picture look more like a landscape. Overall awesome work!!! Keep it up!!!
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